A miscellany of weekly ramblings on comics, art and film by Ted Mathot, storyboard artist and writer/artist/self-publisher of graphic novels and comics
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Sunday, May 13, 2007

Story: What not to tell?

I've wanted to post something about this topic ever since I saw Children of Men for the first time. When I saw the film's trailer I was worried it was going to be a film about "why women can no longer have babies"; the idea sounded very high-concept to me and I was reluctant to even see the film. When I did see it, I was pleasantly surprised that the reason why women could no longer reproduce was LEFT OUT of the film. Not explained. And it was a brilliant move. What we're left with is what has happened as a result of such a tragic occurrence and what may eventually happen when a baby is miraculously born.

Just a few days ago I finished reading the Pulitzer prize winning book, "The Road" by Cormack McCarthy, a post apocalyptic road story about a father and his son. We never find out what happened to the world which has been all but destroyed, but it doesn't matter. I was so wrapped up in the character relationships and McCarthy's incredible depictions of the world that I didn't care. Another perfect case of leaving something out in order to support the story.



So in these cases what's left out is just as important as what's put in. I've heard this many times and experienced it with regard to music as well (especially jazz) that when you choose not to play can be just as important was when you do.

That said, it happened again this morning when I watched the trailer for "Day Night Day Night" about a woman who has signed on to complete a horrific task. The trailer tells us nothing about her employers, and it appears we're going to be with her in her head for the duration of the film. It hasn't been released where I live yet, but I'm anxious to check it out. See the trailer here.

5 comments:

-David Poe said...

The analogy of Jazz to any movie or book is probably the best way pacing and "story telling" is supposed to be. Children of men had long seemingly peaceful tones stabbed with sharp moments of chaos. Then silence followed by more melodies.

I think I will read that book.
Thank you.

TSM said...

Thanks for the comment David. If you decide to read The Road, I suggest reading it in as few sittings as possible. It goes very quickly and is very engaging (although a word of caution -- it's quite dark in tone).

Nick Sung said...

Hey Ted.
This is something that's been on my mind a lot lately. It's tough trying to figure out what needs explanation and what doesn't; finding that play of question and answer that keeps a film moving, and knowing when not to tip the hand at all; it requires some courage.

It's tough!

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By the by, Day Night Day Night looks awesome.
Thanks for the head up!

Doron Meir said...

Good point. Too often writers will insist on confusing us (and themselves) with irrelevant background details - just because they thought about it, and now they need us to know too.

LOOCH said...

I just finished and enjoyed The Road and came across this post. Along the lines of what's left out, I read somewhere that story can have negative space the way images do. Quite an interesting analogy...